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Addie's avatar

Yes being illegal is what they have made of us and I like how you expose society without being judgement and critical but still do. It's a masterpiece. Love it.

Shygurl's avatar

thank you!! my goal was to be blunt while keeping it kind in a sense <3

ramblingrose's avatar

i rly want to connect w other writers esp ones i like their style of and i wld love to be mutuals!!!! and if u wanna read my pieces i can’t wait to read more of urs!!⭐️⭐️❣️

Shygurl's avatar

yes for sure!!!

Grey Elliot, he/him's avatar

Existence is illegal

Shygurl's avatar

why is that so real thooo

Riker Rhodes's avatar

Wonderful work as always.

Maybe I shouldn't have, but the "I'm Illegal" line kept making me giggle

Even though it's a serious toppic

Shygurl's avatar

lol its okay

Alex Lee Woods's avatar

I want to comment on this but I don't know what to say, all I know is that my feelings are positive.

Shygurl's avatar

thats really good cuz now i know i was able to write it in a way so its understandable and relatable <33

Unforgotten Books's avatar

Sorry, I don't get the connection between being a woman and being illegal... or it's just too early for me.

𝚗𝚊𝚗𝚘𝚞˙ᵕ˙'s avatar

it’s a metaphor. being a woman isn’t literally illegal, but the way we’re treated makes it feel like we are. our clothes get policed. our bodies get shamed. our confidence gets punished. we speak and get labeled aggressive, emotional, or a bitch. we exist and get told to shrink.

that’s the correlation :)

𝚗𝚊𝚗𝚘𝚞˙ᵕ˙'s avatar

wow i just made a comment about why being confident as a woman feels illegal 😭 this is it in a nutshell. truly aggravating

Shygurl's avatar

girl yes i saw it. shoot i should have tagged you. im so so sorry

𝚗𝚊𝚗𝚘𝚞˙ᵕ˙'s avatar

it’s okay babes, this is more universal than anything🤍 you worded it perfectly.

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Shygurl's avatar

aww thank you!!!